How has dieting changed from Kellogg’s era to today’s generation? How has it stayed the same? By looking further into the two documents related to health, I could come up with a few key points or thoughts as to why things have changed or stayed the same throughout the years. Each document contained two very different types of dieting and varying thoughts involving a persons’ diet. However, if closely looked at a person can see the similarities between the two, as well as its differences.
After reading this first paragraph what do you think my paper is about?
After reading Kaila's first paragraph I think her paper is about comparing and contrasting dieting of two very different eras. By the sounds of it there are some things about dieting today that are the same as back in the other time era. Also, there will probably be points made about how diets have improved or gotten worse over time.
ReplyDeleteI think that Kaila's first paragraph is going to be about comparing how much dieting has changed since the 19th century and present time. Also is going to compare the two and see the improvements that have been made.
ReplyDeleteI feel that your first paragraph does a real good job of simply stating what your paper will be about. From reading it I can expect your paper to analyze how dieting has come up throughout history and gained public attention to the point where it is so easily evident in today's society.
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